ALIVE

Project evaluation for budak Vil Sern and Tyrael



5 Things to evaluate on

1) Plot
2) Casting
3) Setting
4) Shooting
5) Editing & Publishing

1) PLOT
First of all the bell sound was irritating enough at the beginning and the title is like a horror movie. Ok la, the plot not bad but pretty shallow. I was expecting more from both of you. Perhaps if you had sat down and put a lil more twist into it then it'll be more interesting.
Dialogue wise is baddd. Dudes, i want to see the script! where is it?

2) CASTING
Ok la, since we're lacking of ppl in Infuse and i was on a holiday. lol.

3) SETTING
Choice of room is bad. It's so neat and nice plus he's a drinker and smoker. Furthermore lap tops are too high of a choice for him. Give him a cd player ma. Summore where got people wear the same clothes to sleep and mandi wear back the same wan.
Beer bottles make sure put water inside next time and don't fling it here and there. Lol.

4) SHOOTING
Some angles are good, but the creativity in different angles should be explored more.
One more important thing is that check the light exposure in your camera. Some are super bright and some too dark.

5) EDITING & PUBLISHING
Got too much noise la and clack clack noise whenever scene changes. Choice of music oso have to reconsider.

CONCLUSION
Can see the effort put in and not bad for the first time. Well, of course i always expect 2 of you to do better cause there's 2 of u la and not 1.
So please go and watch more movies and learn how to play with the camera angles and one thing i missed out! The arrangements of scenes are predictable because you did not use story board! Please use them next time so there'll be not too much randomness!

Ok la. Can pass.